bro cooked

shid

actually really cool lol, i like the chords and idea behind it alot. I just think it gets a bit repetitive after some time as its essentially the same 4 bars over and over again with a slight beat change every now and then (switch it up with more variation, fills, effects, transitions. use tracks you like alot to your advantage, compare, get inspired. check out how they do it) . your lead sounds complement each other pretty nicely (idk if theyre the same sound or not, doesnt matter it sounds great) just as another ocmment here said, it definitely needs more high end like white noise ish high end 9-10khz and above-ish. The vocal is also a nice addition just has very unfitting processing in comparison to the rest of the song, its very high endy and has that "HhHhh" sound (idk) prominently put, id lower that a little.

about kick and snare, could be a bit louder (if you want you could aim for roughly same volume as everything else, maybe around 3db above it.) i also think the kick doesnt have enough transient and high end either, its a very very soft kick which goes nicely kinda gives it a lofi-ish feel but yk, a bit more high end would be pleasing. snare is aight.

Idk what else to say i wrote this relatively quickly so i hope you dont accidentall ytake any offense to what i said lol.

overall really nice bro